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Relationship between a master and a young disciple! Cold, secluded Master vs. Blackened, Crazy Disci...
Not the best I’ve read
In about like the first 20 chapters I was grinding my gears waiting for Seme to recognize Uke as his master
Why the fuck did it take so long?Is he dense?in denial?
I lost a few brain cells reading that part
The art is nice but it’s looks....stiff?
The characters look like they just stand around idly liek npcs
And moreover whenever ANYONE gets hit and slurpt our some blood
Isn’t that like....a fatal wound?
Isn’t puking blood a result internal injures
They just slurpt out some blood like spit and go on with their day
Seme is really really annoying
Motherfucker can’t comprehend that his master can care about other people
Since he has been his discipline for so long wouldn’t he know his master’s nature?
And that one guy who had his whole clan killed by the mysterious blue people framing it as Seme’s clan
Is he...brainless?
He DEFINITELY KNOWS how strong Seme is yet STILL go out of his way to not only FOLLOW him but also try to assassinate him???
He is clearly no match for Seme and yet goes out of his way to opening court death itself
At east he could’ve like..spent some time to build up his strength to be on par with Seme,making him a probable antagonist
But noooooo,no brain
Also this is VERY poorly translated,tons of minor mistakes,there’s even some blank dialogue and from what I read in the comments missing pages?
Not only that but the others characters are also...lacking
Chu Yi or whatever that asshat is named
Motherfucker can’t seem to get the hint he’s fucking hopeless,he definitely likes Seme,but can’t comprehen he’s nothing but prawn in his eyes,so far Seme has shown NO REMORSE towards him,even as far as saying if he gets annoying Seme will kill him,yet the guy still likes him?????what?????