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Okay, I agree with a lot of different things you guys are saying. But can’t we just agree that both of them have hella issues?? I get why both sides are doing what they’re doing. I mean, the fml got everything taken away from her and was partially forced into that relationship bc of the circumstances. Not to mention the ml’s personality. And the fact that she said to him that if he lied to her again or hid anything when he had a chance to say everything he hid, that she would leave him. And she stuck to that promise when she found out the ml left her childhood friend, and first love to die. ON THE OTHER HAND, the fml treating the ml like a child lovingly while putting him to war, then right when he comes back treats him coldly bc he didn’t look that same must’ve effected the ml. There’s a lot of aspects to this story that affected BOTH parties, and therefore BOTH are in the wrong. They’re toxic, and always have been because of what they’ve had to endure. So please stop hating only on one side if you can’t understand the nature of this situation. (Yes ik it’s just a story but I needed to get this off my chest)
I loved this! I could say that I wish the main character’s best friend (I can’t remember names for my life) figured out that the main character and the ml we’re dating… And the characters could’ve indulged more emotionally into killing the monsters who were once people. Like even though they don’t have their own will they were people at one point but the story kinda just moves on without the characters really digging into it, besides bits and pieces into the beginning. Which is fine, but I feel like it would’ve made more sense emotionally. Other than that, this story was so interesting and I loved the side story!