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I don't know how to feel, I didn't like the ending. Haru and Tsukasa were an unlikely (and awkward) couple. During the reading I felt that Haru loved Tsukasa like a father loves a child, especially in the first scenes (I thought it would be the story of two parents raising their children together), but then Tsukasa started to have feelings for him (and I I was still hoping they weren't going to end up together). And it makes me wonder does Haru really like Tsukasa romantically? Because he liked Ryou and as soon as he disappears he accepts Tsukasa's feelings (I think it's kind of weird because Tsukasa is a teenager). Also, he rejected Ryou and feels guilty. What if he doesn't like Tsukasa but is afraid that if he rejects Tsukasa he will disappear like Ryou? Maybe I'm thinking too much but I don't know
Was the ending left open? I think? But I liked it. I don't know if it was on purpose, but I also don't remember a single moment when Snow White says she loves Alice or one of her romantic interests. As much as he has shown Alice with his "in-laws". I also missed Alice's past, like what his life was like before? what is the motivation for him to go to the mirror world? (I think he had a good financial life considering his clothes in the chapter that shows how they became kings, but later when he's in the mirror his clothes are dirty, we see an image of the red king with a knife outside and him in a house holding a piece of fabric) I feel like Snow White is losing her protagonism during the chapters, I have no idea what she's thinking or if she likes Alice or another character, I don't even know what she's thinking in the last chapters, and the focus She only comes back in the final chapter. Furthermore, did you notice that the red king looks younger? Unlike the initial chapters, he seems older and more mature. As much as I said all this, I liked the story, the plot and the development.