♡sherivellynxx♡'s Manga

lol it was a one shot and a rly short one at that like-it had 9 pages-forget the first and last bc they're not part of the story-and they weren't one of those loong pages no-
didn't make me feel anything
so lol

omg this was soo good and just so incredibly adorable-
i can't find faults in this dkggmx
so yes the main story gets 5/5
idrk about the one shot tho

omg!omg!omg! this was honestly too adorable omfg-
um ofc there was stuff that could be improved and this was kinda rushed just a teeny bit tho so its okaayy
the art and story and everything was

damn um this was mad dark-the ending was so twisted-i feel like the black haired dude was a yandere like-yk bc he tried killing the other dude's girl?-and that he didn't care much abt the blonde dude's hapiness and all he wanted was to just keep shirotani next to him bc he loved shirotani v much-
like his past trauma rly messed him up
and the ending was so twisted-like bye-shirotani was so sad but he was umm scared????maybe???of the black haired dude?? like he probably didn't want to be w the black haired dude atall but he couldn't rly do anything bc the other dude was insane??? i think that's what the ending shows??
anyways if this was longer i would be legit bawling my eyes out haha i hate this sm haha (like this is rly good but so painful that it just makes me wanna hate it but its just so well written)
also the art 10/10

damnnnnnnn this is good-
but ok skjhsdhfjaghs this was going well but then the mains realising their feelings and then confessing was SO rushed like girlie byee-like them realising their feelings and then confessing happened over a span of 3 chapters atmost-like no??? but it be okay bc this is just interesting and just overall bussin that it makes up for that lil problem tho the confession was cute ngl just v rushed
umm the story is soo interesting-i like the story sm-umm anyways i get so invested in ch 128-130 just to find out that this is on hiatus-
like-what tf
and its marked completed so i don't think its coming back??!!-like-

LOL! overall it wasn't good um but the confession-that was-one of the cutest confessions ive seen lmao-like yes!!

this was fairly cute and like yesssss
tho i did skip to the last chapter after the mains got together lol haha
i was about to give fools a 3 star but its just-jeongwoo or justin whatever his sMILE IS JUSTHES JUST SOOOO ADORABLE IM HAVING A HEART ATTACK A A A A
also what kind of name is edward

lol this was really interesting and entertaining,but like um it ended sorta abruptly and like what was the paper airplane scene in ch 12??? like when did that happen it doesn't fit in the story's timeline??? also what was up w the dad's signature thingy????there's minor stuff like this at a few points in the story but overall the story was very interesting and i never once got bored while reading this-like i finished this in one day lol

also DID THEY START DATING OR NOT SMH-

this was like-nono wait im-i was-when i uhh-when i started reading this i couldn't have guessed that this would turn this dark-like omg it-this was good and all but boy i wasn't ready for this angst tf????did not see such painful shit coming *At All*
also JUSTICE FOR CHILLI PEPPER GUY!!!!!!
also wtf is aerak and heeno's relationship-its so-messed up and unstable its-like heeno needs-like-NEEDS-to know how much he hurt aerak like stfu

(mid - re-read)
ayoo honestly i think i like yumin and dohoon's story best frfr
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HELLOOOOO AJJDHAHAHAHAH WHAT IS HEENO'S FIRST INTERACTION W JAERIM LMAOAOSIEHJAHAH IM CRACKING UPP AHJDZJAH

BRO IT-THE WRITER LIKE DROPPED IT-AT A F U C K I N G C L I F F H A N G E R -LEAVE-GET OUT-IM-SOMEONE BETTER PICK THIS UP LIKE---AND I LIKE THIS ONE SM TOO-BRUHHHH