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I don't know if it's only me but this is all really confusing, I still need to process I what I've just read.
The place of the story changes almost every page, I still have to understand who the protagonist is. Also, BIG lack of logic...If you're a time traveler why would say that to someone who lives in the past in such a carefree manner???
I'll wait for further updates and I hope that my doubst will be cleared...
