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Thank goodness that she had some clarity in her damn mind in this chapter. Like if she was a detective, wouldn't she be focused on looking for clues more rather than already being dead set that the duke is the killer?
I've seen so many stories like this wherein the FL is so deadset on the ML being like this or that, that they don't see anything else. They try to pass it as comedy but sh*t like that gets old so fast and becomes annoying.
Hopefully this gets better.