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idk if anyone else agrees but does anyone else like, not really enjoy when a story starts in the middle of the action/with the character waking up in an unknown place and THEN we have to find out how they got there in short little flashbacks like immediately right after ? like why couldn't we just start at the village ? why couldn't we follow this character through that journey ? it would have allowed us to actually, get to know and *feel* for this character more yk ? i'm guessing it has something to do w chapter/time constraints ..? this seems like a 5-6 chap story so that's why i'm drawing that conclusion