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7/10
A good, light hearted story about an author called "Vasser" who fell into her own novel! She meets the main villain Kyte of her 2-part series starring the first and second prince respectively.
Loves:
I especially love the plot of the story and romance of the two characters. It was interesting and different as the readers slowly understood the technicalities of Vasser's magic powers. I especially liked Kyte's character, as he was written quite well (compared to other characters)
The artstyle is also so pretty and at the same time simple, which gave its charm! I love the designs of Kyte and Vasser.
Critiques:
I love the plot and the hook at the beginning, however I think plot-wise that was the most interesting part of the story. I felt like the story had so much potential if it was fleshed out and written a bit better and dived into the complicated feelings of transmigrating into your own novel or other characters finding out that their whole world and lives are controlled/created by the person standing next to them than just accepting it as fact. Instead, it felt like the actions of characters and direction of the story felt insignificant, and at times forced. It felt like they were added just to push the story forward, and wasn't well thought out (+ so much plot armor) especially when Kyte's loyal aide, Perret somehow fell in love with Vasser with barely any romantic encounters. It felt forced to have a "love rival/triangle" for the sake of it. There are many more examples of this throughout the story (cough.. the "real" main villain of the story.. cough).
Conclusion:
It was a pretty good read, although not the best. If you love a light-hearted romance with some cliches, and a light plot, and short read, this is for you!