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I think the story is amazing but i'm sad they didn't touch on Kerose's mantal illness, he clearly was twisted and had some sort of childhood trauma thinking he *killed* the boy he liked but they just ignored it anx treated it as a normal behaviour +-+ it's kinda creepy and scary that he's a doctor with that twisted of a personality
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Ummm that is not a normal behaviour from a normal human being, i smell a manipulative partner ! And yes call me overreacting or sensitive but like um excuse you ? Why is K acting like lil cutie problems don't matter and his fear isn't valid ? I felt like I didn't like him since he started blackmailing him but then it just got worse ! Why did he just ignore my boy's feelings about his friend ? He should've actually took the time to speak and understand him ! Try to find where exactly his fear is coming from and how to help ! No one changes just because they're feeling forced to do so ! Maybe he will actually come out because he was forced by his boyfriend but that wouldn't stop the fear ! Also why does he always force him to have sex ? I mean yeah the uke did look like he really enjoyed it and was fine with it but he said multiple times he didn't want to do it in the classroom ! Can people just listen to each other and stop using love and sexual pleasure to manipulate and control their partner
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I dont really find him manipulative. Hes more to the type whos very open sometimes very reckless with his life. And this is actually a good way to boost confidence since the uke has zero, Kei is actually perfect for him to be confident in his sexual orientation; introverted suits best with an extroverted. Finding solace in each other is also as important as having good communication. Like for me, the feeling with my bestfriend, we dont need words to be comfortable. Staying close, having her presence near is enough. Same goes with romantic partner
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Ye I v agree, the seme gave major sus vibes in the beginning. I still have mixed feelings cuz he ain't listen. I get the taking someone out of their comfort zone 'reason' but trust, forcing someone to do something is not the same as convincing them . Literally he did better when he held his hand and said relax in the last updated scene over all the other times he was dragging the uke around.
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Andy didn't even tell him he wanted him to *stop* he just said it hurts, he was feeling really good though and he didn't evn push him away ! Andy is just a little full of himself and he didn't want to admit that he liked it, that is not r@pe (: he didn't ask him to stop, he just asked him to be more gentle
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Do y'all ever feel like forcing the person you like to have sex with you because you want to manipulate them into thinking they like you because you give them good sex ? Of course not because you're a sane human being that understands what communication is ! Like he should've just asked why didn't he want to do it and the other mf would've said he fucking like him ! He didn't even make him feel good he was hella rough ! Sexual pleasure isn't really about you're genitalia as much as about your mental state
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The plot idea is nice but the characters are just weird
So the Knight is quite a pushover, he just let the crown prince kiss and fuck with him yet told the brown haired dude that he'ss consider being with him ?
The crown prince is just a disgusting human being, no matter how much you're obsessed with someone you can't just make a deal reagding people's lives ! He's just saying *if you ain't gonna let me fuck i ain't stopping the SERIAL KILLER* and that's just the most creepy thing ever
And that creepy brown haired dude that i can't recall the name of ! For god's sake, he's scary as hell. Like i'm quite convinced he might be the killer
Just look at the way he smiles so creepily ! And how he speaks as if he was the nicest person ever which i'm pretty sure he isn't
So yeah I know it was all great and they were safe and all BUT i have two main big issues that i'd like to express :
Firstly i don't appreciate how the dom sub thing works ! It felt forced and rapey at the beginning ! And i understand this type of thing is similar to omegaverse but that's also kind of rapey ! I am a dom but i wouldn't just force someone to submit to me because they're a sub ! That's hella messed up
Secondly why the fuck did he have to say that the sub reminded him of his dog ? It was just so nasty and made me feel uncomfortable thinking that he would think of his dead dog while fucking him #-.-) that being said i enjoy pet play but not thinking of ACTUAL animals lol
Other than that the story was lovely
*nervous laugh* ehem
What part of my comment made you nervous ? ;)
*deep breath* do you want brutal honesty or public appropriate response? ****////THE SMIRK THO, YA KNOW I'M DYING OVER HERE SIR, MA'AM, CAPTAIN
Miss me with the public appropriate shit i want the tea (: i mean i can guess what it's about !
I liked the performance of the seme in the story cuz I would have wanted to be dominated anytime I did something wrong... Like I could trust someone to keep my control other than me, that'd be nice, ya know? Being a rebel is liberating, true, but that doesn't mean lines should be crossed
Gaaah I dunno... I just ... It would be nice to rely on a stronger power once you realise it's, well, it is correctly directed (?)
I understand that you hated that the dom just up and did it but it looked cool... My opinions are hardly articulated gah sorry (´ . . . `)
Plus you mentioned you were a dom so I got reeled up- MAJORLY CURIOUS- but yah... Um... Ya...
You sound like a good girl,boy, person (: a nice and obedient sub is such a refreshing thing to see, lovely ~
However i didn't necessarily hate the dom's behaviours because i'm a dom myself and i would've been more brutal with someone as rebellious as the kid in the story ! However it just made me uncomfortable that they made the sub and dom thing forced, like he didn't have a choice but to submit to him and that his dom was chosen randomly for him
As a sub you should understand the difference between you wanting to be dominated and the kid in the story being kind of raped in the first 2 chapters +-+
But again it might be me overthinking because i'm so sensitive when it comes to sub's consent and mental health as i feel it's my responsibility in a way XD