Oribu's Manga

This is so weird
It’s like bad…but has a good plot.. but has a badly written plot at the same time… and the dialogue, flow, pace sucks ass
I just kinda didn’t enjoy any of it in the end even though it could’ve been really good….
Idk def not a reread unless there is some retranslation or something
Tbh I was rushing through all chapters, I just kinda wanted it to end?… and there were so many plot points I kinda want this to be a full on show and this feels like a rough draft.. yea maybe

The artstyle can be a litttle sloppy but it’s still really beautiful
The story was really engaging too! I liked it!
I’m expecting great works from this author!
The last chapter was a little tough though the smug was very messy and the redrawn dick was a serious jumpscare…
It’s a 4* but it’s really is solid

Whatever

They talk like robots wth

The yaoi proportions are killing me
But it’s fine they’re not that’s bad and the style is so pretty
They’re very cute and it’s a nice short story!
If not for the extra they would be so pure T T