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It was hot, kind of, first chapter... but... the progression is way too quick... and it just feels very much toxic... and I mean... Its still okay, but I don't really like it.
If they took more time, and they actually got to know each other and the setting was a bit different I would enjoy this quite a bit.
Like, 3 chapters is not enough.
I think it should have had 5 - 7 chapters and more progression and character development.
Also what kinda bullshit is that 'he was trying so hard from the beginning' bullshit. He raped you bro... Like... uhm?
He isn't even listening to you at all and yet you like it?
Toxic. I don't like the last 2 chapters.
Even the last half of first chap was crappy.
Like, leave the classroom sex for when you actually know each other properly lol
Yes, it was hot, but very crappy tbh plot wise, I never really got attached to the characters at all & there isn't much redeemable about the student. Like...?
Just saying, needed more character build up for him, I swear dude.