Story is good, bottom is amazing tho, he has PERSONALITY, most bottom don't have one, sorry guys. But for top, he doesn't looks a loves uke. I couldn't love him
Seme is amazing, but the rest.. Uke is drama queen, I really don't like this type of weak bottoms. Also not even a proper kissing scene? I am done, give me my power bottoms
Such a hate for seme. But actually I loved him. He is an interesting top, especially compared to other bl tops. He shows his feelings and for his friend, he hid his feelings. He is nice and cute and loves uke. Also he looks like Gintoki <3
If you wanted to make a different story line, I wish the end would match that. After what happened, I hope it won't end just a happy end. And I just didn't like this seme
More smut tho, it is amazing, but pls a little bit smut, God...