beta
When I tell you in the beginning it was so good like waiting for updates every day and waiting for the next in my hands and knees kind of thing. The potential was exponential. The story was plot-driven with little tidbits of foreshadowing of smut, the sexual tension between the seme and uke was amazing and I couldn't wait for the story to build up. Again the potential was there and then it was gone. The storyline and mood of the story suddenly changed to the point I didn't exactly understand the actions and intentions of the characters. At some points, it would be retconned and then built upon as some kind of “twist”. The build-up to these “twists” was lackluster and lazy at most. Other decisions are made by supposedly smart characters like the Uka for example. He seemed smart, strategic and knew what he wanted. Abruptly that changed and he turned into every other uke in BL’s, it was disappointing.
Overall the current story has turned lackluster and lazy. The random points of rape and non-con aren't even surprising anymore. The smut has become as boring as the rest of the story. The sexual tension between the MCs was thrown away entirely leaving me to feel whiplashed. It's so disappointing to see a plot like this go to waste.