beta
This is still a good story. The characters and the progression is just as well written as I remembered it when I first started reading this.
HOWEVER, the unnecessary sex was a huge turn off. The reasoning behind it, made absolutely no sense. There was already enough angst and tension in this story. It didn't help develop their characters whatsoever and it was not necessary to move the story forward. there was a loooot of stuff happening already.
Also, to have sex with someone else because you can't have sex with the one you "love"? I mean, come on, that's one shitty excuse if I see one.
But of course, that issue will def be pushed to the side because it was really not necessary in the first place.
Ugh. Now I can't read this anymore.