yamamabitch's Topics (156)

i do love this story, i just hope there isn't any romance or harem. i say this because i swear to god the story keeps introducing characters and its spotlight during introduction is a female character. the train incident, the principal, 3rd order girl.

the blue haired student, silver haired student, (the other female students i'm not so worried about they're not involved that much)

the silver haired knighty order leader whatnot, the teacher, the animist spirit whatever she does with the fire human spirit.

are you trying to instigate a harem..? because WHAT A COINCIDENCE!
i don't mind MC and underground slums alley miss fashionista being a thing seeing that one giggly romantic stunt he did healing her eye. but if he's with a student, lord idk what comments and shit i'd say.

and now this blue haired detective that is suddenly inserted to the story as if there's not like three other groups trying to find the MC already.

like? crimes happens a lot in the real world where it can be done by separate people with no connections and suddenly stop and can coincidentally be a year apart and that these criminals could have all stopped.

for the similar century this is set at in comparison to ours, lord these characters are ... now i understand this is just FiCtIoN aNd JuSt A sToRy now shut the hell up?

also that pink haired rat is kinda annoying

Obviously, the writer wants to fucking make the characters' will disrespected vy making them absolutely experience the opposite of what they want. This dude could literally just go run away LIKE HELLO

preferably colored

smh

i wish the slime kid could become human again, that's so sad also... why hasn't there been an update

i really liked the story however his "powers" kinda escalated horribly and it went unexplained. i understand it's fiction however, he went from being naturally charged that the AI went to his brain and could show stuff without projecting etc. he also could see the patient's full condition and diagnosis through comparison with the internet etc. but it was all because he was touching them. later on, he goes glancing at the patients without having to touch them and has a full ass x-ray and scans seeing where the bones and shit are like hello...? your conductivity because of his electric charge made him able to see those in the first place, so it made sense when he would touch them but he doesn't need to anymore especially when the patient is fully clothed modestly like it was the ice age.

i also just can't stand how he's so overtly annoying trying to save everyone like boi you're one person, you can't save the whole population just because you have a little bit of knowledge and AI in your brain. you're not jesus. he's also randomly not going on break... because he wants to save people like HELP ME how are you going to save people when your body's not in good condition, you're just going to cause more problems rather than solving them. you're a newbie, not superman. stay in your lane and follow protocols.

i feel like i've read this and not a promo?

she's so badass and her earth life is so badass too but she becomes a pedo bad person instead of badass... no spoiler warning idgaf y'all need to be warned before reading and getting mad for wasting time on this

i love the story however, it felt like we pretty much got most of the intro from the prologue. it feels stretched out and a lot of parts of it is unnecessary for the development of the story. most of the key infos are already laid out in the first few chapters, i just wish they already moved to the part where it ended on the prologue. obviously, there's only been 11 chapters so far but around 30 chapters makes a season. i'm not about to read more than 15 chapters of them being younger and stuff. just my thoughts, nothing's wrong with the story so don't attack me.