First off I will say that I actually do really like the MC’s design, I find her hair to be very cute despite some of the comments I’ve read saying they dislike it. The overall concept of this story is that she’s the author who transmigrated into her novel, which isn’t really looked into that deeply. The MC doesn’t really acknowledge often that the world she is inside of is the story she wrote, which I was hoping she’d bring more attention to but she didn’t??
Anyways, the romance between her and the ML is good, I feel like there could’ve been more tension, but still what we got is decent. I love the kids and think they’re adorable. The ogFL, seems nice and I really hope she doesn’t become the villain in the end. Mainly because I thought her relationship with the MC was sweet and also because the ogVillainess/owner of the MC’s body, made her promise to give everyone a happy ending and them being enemies doesn’t necessarily lead to ogFL having a happy ending.
Anyways, plot is rather basic and overused, but still a good read. The art is great and it’s rather fluffy at times. I find the ML’s expressions when he’s with the MC absolutely perfect, it makes you really tell that he has feelings for her. I like the fact they also show his perspective of the MC and his development in trying to not view her as just a possession but as a person who can make choices to do things without him all the time and stuff. The MC herself is rather nice, though she has little flaws and her presence in the story is somewhat impactful, her overall character seems kinda basic and lacking? I mean she has parts of her that I love, like her talent in caring for children and her overall kindness, but I really liked that one scene where she and the duke bickered for a bit while learning to dance.
I think that if they had dived more into the fact that she was the author of the story and had more knowledge of her book and was confused as to why the world was going off the pages, she’d probably have a bit more to her character. I think her overall lack of having a goal is what makes her seem less interesting. I mean at first it’s obviously to escape her family and then like be the maid to the kids. Then afterwards be the fiancé to the duke until the ogFL arrives. But afterwards it feels like she kinda lost her purpose for a bit, but obviously it seems that the story is gonna hone in on the fact that she is not from this world(finally!).
Anyways I like the manhwa and will be eager for the next updates!
First off I will say that I actually do really like the MC’s design, I find her hair to be very cute despite some of the comments I’ve read saying they dislike it. The overall concept of this story is that she’s the author who transmigrated into her novel, which isn’t really looked into that deeply. The MC doesn’t really acknowledge often that the world she is inside of is the story she wrote, which I was hoping she’d bring more attention to but she didn’t??
Anyways, the romance between her and the ML is good, I feel like there could’ve been more tension, but still what we got is decent. I love the kids and think they’re adorable. The ogFL, seems nice and I really hope she doesn’t become the villain in the end. Mainly because I thought her relationship with the MC was sweet and also because the ogVillainess/owner of the MC’s body, made her promise to give everyone a happy ending and them being enemies doesn’t necessarily lead to ogFL having a happy ending.
Anyways, plot is rather basic and overused, but still a good read. The art is great and it’s rather fluffy at times. I find the ML’s expressions when he’s with the MC absolutely perfect, it makes you really tell that he has feelings for her. I like the fact they also show his perspective of the MC and his development in trying to not view her as just a possession but as a person who can make choices to do things without him all the time and stuff. The MC herself is rather nice, though she has little flaws and her presence in the story is somewhat impactful, her overall character seems kinda basic and lacking? I mean she has parts of her that I love, like her talent in caring for children and her overall kindness, but I really liked that one scene where she and the duke bickered for a bit while learning to dance.
I think that if they had dived more into the fact that she was the author of the story and had more knowledge of her book and was confused as to why the world was going off the pages, she’d probably have a bit more to her character. I think her overall lack of having a goal is what makes her seem less interesting. I mean at first it’s obviously to escape her family and then like be the maid to the kids. Then afterwards be the fiancé to the duke until the ogFL arrives. But afterwards it feels like she kinda lost her purpose for a bit, but obviously it seems that the story is gonna hone in on the fact that she is not from this world(finally!).
Anyways I like the manhwa and will be eager for the next updates!