you thought he was green then suddenly he changed colours like a disco ball
Bisssshhhh$xxxxxxx ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
i just started reading and goddamnnn jaekyung’s pretty face is absolutely my type.. but like for a bottom. and holy shet why is there so many bl with these type of irritating whiny assed bottoms ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
You have a problem with Dan…but not rapist, abusive, CREEP Jaekyung (ー_ー) get some help.
We can see your bias also, Dan is sexy
I agree with the second half but I'm hate-reading so each expression Docdan makes it becomes even more ridiculous and entertaining for me oops
I can explain.. but go back to chapter 1 and chapter 3. or keep reading on.... But I don't agree with you on your opinion about him.
This is not an opinion. This is not criticism. If you can't handle positive opinions on JK who is a sexual abuser, abusive and toxic person, who can be viewed as a creep and falsely claimed to be a rapist by a false reading then you need your own advice. You are telling something to get help because their opinion is different. That is immature.
right like bffr
Girl you cannot be real right now. Jaekyung is a fucking rapist how many times did Dan tell him to stop that he does not like it and still, he does not listen. He is raping him point blank period. Talking about how we should go back and read it again. It's you that should read it back over.
No, it's not this person should seriously get help cause in real life they might find someone like this to be attractive and end up getting abused like Dan later on. They need to know that this should not be normalized or that they shouldn't be attracted to it.
You’re a weirdo, no other way to cut it. Your dickriding a guy who wouldn’t even let Dan answer the phone to check if his grandma was okay and is parading him around as his property without his consent like come tf on, you’re sick of “whiny bottoms” but not rapist tops, who wouldn’t know consent if it sucker punched him in the face, like I said before, get some fucking help.
FR, it was so obvious what type of person Jaekyung was from the very beginning when he assaulted that one guy he was sleeping with before Dan…and then here goes this dizzy motherfucker trying to act like we don’t get what’s going on when it’s very clear what type of timing this author is on because both their top characters are rapists and the bottoms are pushovers who deserve more for their self
"No, it's not this person should seriously get help cause in real life they might find someone like this to be attractive and end up getting abused like Dan later on. They need to know that this should not be normalized or that they shouldn't be attracted to it."
I am responding to both of your triggered responses in one comment.
1. I am a straight man with no opinion on the story but it is toxic. My wife and best friend are in Yaoi and I am asked to analyze things or settle something.
2. I am dead serious.
3. Your hostility is not welcome. I have read it many times and analyzed it. I know the difference between Rape and SA. I can comprehend a story.
4. I can also have a civil and mature conversation without forcing anything. It's you that should read it back over if you see rape.
5. Learn to differentiate between fantasy and reality. Experts will say the op is healthy and common. When these attacks on the OP are not healthy and toxic. They stem from insecurities and cowardice.
8. No they probably will not get abused like Dan. You guys are in the wrong. Stop being SJW. You are doing nothing but looking foolish and embarrassing yourselves.
To Godfather,
retorting to insults. You have no rational arguments. - insults - full of ego, childish, impulsive, and self-centered. -ad hominem attacks. vulgar, Making up BS. I have no interest in JK. He is not a woman or my wife.
You are talking about yourself. "When you judge others, you don't define them, you define you." You are not calling me a weirdo, you are not calling me sick.
You are showing your insecurities and attacking a straight man. That advice is only good for you as you can't have a conversation and retort to child-like behavior when called out. You are showing everyone how weak you are. You are taking the loss here. You are only cowering.
You seem to be so mad here you makeup BS and can't accept he is a sexual abuser and not a rapist. why are you so obsessed with rape and rapist? Are you blind? I disagreed with the OP on Dan. Have a conversation or keep embarrassing yourself.
How childish.
Okay since u said ur a guy, so dude, u realised ur whole shit u wrote was wild asf, and u know why people are calling jk a rapist? its because Dan is bounded, if he won't fuck, he's afraid he'll upset jk and lose his job, I think u forgot the fact that his grandma is sick and he needs the cash, Dan literally said am i allowed to say no, and the mf jk was like u can't, like hello?????? I don't know what defines rape in your definition, but in mine this made the cut, I have absolutely no problem if anyone enjoys this and as long as they understands this is not normal, or honestly u like this in real life just for yourself, then I'm not gonna say anything, your life, your rules, what I don't like is that people like you refusing to accept this is rape, anything without consent is rape, you'll say it isn't, Dan said yes, like I said, he needs the money, and you can look at his face before they fuck. Oh right and when jk refused to use condom when Dan asked him to what about that?? God seriously.
"u realised ur whole shit u wrote was wild asf,"
I see that as your reply to me. You are not talking to me. You are writing like I threatened. I threaten your previous rape pov. Is that how you treat others? over a trivial story? over a trivial opinion? It is a fiction story. it is irrelevant. Your behavior, on the other hand, is disgusting.
"and u know why people are calling jk a rapist?"
Keeping with their first response, not understanding the story, not understanding SA and Rape, wanting to hate the story, causing more hate. not being uneducated, Many reasons.
"I think u forgot the fact that his grandma is sick and he needs the cash,"
That is you assuming. I think you forgot how to have a conversation. Maybe you should TALK to me and not down at me.
"Dan literally said am i allowed to say no, and the mf jk was like u can't, like hello??????""
LIKE HELLO you don't understand those lines. And regardless of what JK says, Dan can always say no. You are missing many elements here. No person is ever required to have sex with someone else regardless of the conditions. You have the wrong interpretation of what he meant to.
"I don't know what defines rape in your definition, but in mine this made the cut"
Not my definition. Research this and you will find out this is SA. He is a sexual abuser. There is no rape,... yet... And you are missing things.
" honestly u like this in real life just for yourself, then I'm not gonna say anything, your life, your rules, "
What do you ask? Hey Tora what is your opinion on Jinx? I was called in to analyze it because my wife, my best friend, and other friends love yaoi. I am a straight male that has no opinion but it is toxic. Do you feel ridiculous now? trying to shame people? over a trivial opinion on a trivial story. However, people do have the right to like this story You are wrong to force your pov on others. I see it as SA because it is. I am not refusing to see it as rape because of your opinion.
"what I don't like is that people like you refusing to accept this is rape, anything without consent is rape," I don't haters like you refusing to accept there are over pov and can accept it to where they attack others and don't talk to them.
"Oh right and when jk refused to use condom when Dan asked him to what about that?? God seriously." I can explain that too because you are misunderstanding that too.
BUT WHY TRY??
Condensing. Forcing your pov. belittling. assuming. refusing to see something that is not there.
you wrote all that to feel better about yourself? Your first sentence, I could imagine if I said something outrageous. Like Dan is a tissue box and Jk is a post. hehe.. What the what?? All that? over this the truth? All that over this?
If you can't handle positive opinions on JK who is a sexual abuser, abusive and toxic person, who can be viewed as a creep and falsely claimed to be a rapist by a false reading then you need your own advice. You are telling something to get help because their opinion is different. That is immature.
Wild asf? hahahahahaha After Tuesday, even the calendar says WTF.
since you accused me of things I did not do.. HEHE I decided to give you something wild asf .... HEHE. HAVE FUN!
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You think English is easy??
I think a retired English teacher was bored.
THIS IS GREAT!
Read all the way to the end.................
This took a lot of work to put together!
1) The bandage was wound around the wound.
2) The farm was used to produce produce.
3) The dump was so full that it had to refuse more refuse.
4) We must polish the Polish furniture.
5) He could lead if he would get the lead out.
6) The soldier decided to desert his dessert in the desert.
7) Since there is no time like the present, he thought it was time to present the present.
8) A bass was painted on the head of the bass drum.
9) When shot at, the dove dove into the bushes.
10) I did not object to the object.
11) The insurance was invalid for the invalid.
12) There was a row among the oarsmen about how to row.
13) They were too close to the door to close it.
14) The buck does funny things when the does are present.
15) A seamstress and a sewer fell down into a sewer line.
16) To help with planting, the farmer taught his sow to sow.
17) The wind was too strong to wind the sail.
18) Upon seeing the tear in the painting I shed a tear.
19) I had to subject the subject to a series of tests.
20) How can I intimate this to my most intimate friend?
Let's face it - English is a crazy language. There is no egg in eggplant, nor ham in hamburger; neither apple nor pine in pineapple. English muffins weren't invented in England or French fries in France . Sweetmeats are candies while sweetbreads, which aren't sweet, are meat. We take English for granted. But if we explore its paradoxes, we find that quicksand can work slowly, boxing rings are square and a guinea pig is neither from Guinea nor is it a pig.
And why is it that writers write but fingers don't fing, grocers don't groce and hammers don't ham? If the plural of tooth is teeth, why isn't the plural of booth, beeth? One goose, 2 geese. So one moose, 2 meese? One index, 2 indices? Doesn't it seem crazy that you can make amends but not one amend? If you have a bunch of odds and ends and get rid of all but one of them, what do you call it?
If teachers taught, why didn't preachers praught? If a vegetarian eats vegetables, what does a humanitarian eat? Sometimes I think all the English speakers should be committed to an asylum for the verbally insane. In what language do people recite at a play and play at a recital? Ship by truck and send cargo by ship? Have noses that run and feet that smell?
How can a slim chance and a fat chance be the same, while a wise man and a wise guy are opposites? You have to marvel at the unique lunacy of a language in which your house can burn up as it burns down, in which you fill in a form by filling it out and in which, an alarm goes off by going on.
English was invented by people, not computers, and it reflects the creativity of the human race, which, of course, is not a race at all. That is why, when the stars are out, they are visible, but when the lights are out, they are invisible.
PS. - Why doesn't 'Buick' rhyme with 'quick'?
You lovers of the English language might enjoy this...
There is a two-letter word that perhaps has more meanings than any other two-letter word, and that is 'UP.'
It's easy to understand UP, meaning toward the sky or at the top of the list, but when we awaken in the morning, why do we wake UP?
At a meeting, why does a topic come UP?
Why do we speak UP and why are the officers UP for election and why is it UP to the secretary to write UP a report?
We call UP our friends.
And we use it to brighten UP a room, polish UP the silver; we warm UP the leftovers and clean UP the kitchen.
We lock UP the house and some guys fix UP the old car. At other times the little word has real special meaning.
People stir UP trouble, line UP for tickets, work UP an appetite, and think UP excuses.
To be dressed is one thing, but to be dressed UP is special.
A drain must be opened UP because it is stopped UP.
We open UP a store in the morning but we close it UP at night.
We seem to be pretty mixed UP about UP!
To be knowledgeable about the proper uses of UP, look UP the word UP in the dictionary.
In a desk-sized dictionary, it takes UP almost 1/4th of the page and can add UP to about thirty definitions.
If you are UP to it, you might try building UP a list of the many ways UP is used.
It will take UP a lot of your time, but if you don't give UP, you may wind UP with a hundred or more. When it threatens to rain, we say it is clouding UP.
When the sun comes out we say it is clearing UP.
When it rains, it wets the earth and often messes things UP.
When it doesn't rain for a while, things dry UP.
One could go on and on, but I'll wrap it UP,
for now my time is UP, so.......it is time to shut UP!
Now it's UP to you what you do with this email.
Oops looks like I offended someone, I never looked down at you, looks like you have some issues bro, this comment made me realise how triggered ppl are, you wrote this whole ass shit for what? Lmao this is gold, I gotta take ss for my friends, and babe if I wanted to shame y'all I would've done that shit so bad, I literally said I don't judge, you're not my mother or should I say father? (In this case) to explain it to you, I hate attacking people's personal life, but stay safe man, yaoi is making you crazy lol, you've clearly never really them extensively, this whole commenting is never deep, and for deep analysis, bro yaoi is the last genre, u should look for, shit is messed up, and what are you even analysing is beyond me, I'm sure even the author gives 0 fucks, lmao, but good for u, read other yaoi too, I'm sure you'll find some patterns ! Good luck !
Like I said, there is still time to leave yaoi...
Figures you would coward again. You are showing everyone how weak you are.
""Oops looks like I offended someone," I merely called you out. if anyone is offended it is you.
"I never looked down at you," Look back, If I wrote you like that....?
" looks like you have some issues bro, " I am not you, bro.
"this comment made me realise how triggered ppl are, "
Haters are triggered. See your reply.
long messages do not indicate my emotions or feelings. It is simply me. long messages are how people communicate. It is had people conduct themselves. You should not see my message as triggered, it is not that deep, bro. That is you being cowering.
"you wrote this whole ass shit for what?" Conversation. To see if you are bad faith player or not.
" Lmao this is gold," Troll trick. It is not gold. I pissed you off. Now you are deflected. I can see through you.
I said what I said. The shame was there and if you did. I call you out ever step of the way. trolling is for cowards. bullying is for cowards.
" yaoi is making you crazy lol, " You have no credibility. I think you are talking about yourself.
I analyzed it because I care about my friend. Sorry having friends you will help is beyond you. It has nothing to do with the author. lmao. Where did I say anything about the author? Your arguments are immature and show your lack of reading skills.
I am not leaving. You can leave. stop trying to silence others. How cowardly. blocked for being a bad faith actor, how cowardly, and when you have good behavior I will unblock you.
how cowardly, and when you have good behavior I will unblock you.
No need, this is who I am, go ahead keep me blocked, I read bl for enjoyment, not engaging with people like you, thats why I never reply in someone's comment, but now I can't leave this, you're calling me coward, when you're blocking me like this? if this is called being weak then sure, atleast I'm not pretending like you, you don't know what to call me, so you call me coward, what are we in 3rd grade? I wasn't gonna reply, but you're comments keeps getting bizzare, I hope you read your reply 2 times atleast and see what you're writing, and called me immature when you wrote that whole 'poem about english' I wrote what i wrote, cause weren't you messing around? I did the same.
Your arguments are immature" How are your arguments, you?
"stop trying to silence others. How cowardly." This is on an action.. not you. How are actions, you?
"blocked for being a bad faith actor, how cowardly, and when you have good behavior I will unblock you." Being is action, how cowardly is action... How are actions and behavior, you?
Not engaging with people like me? genuine, honest, blunt, helpful, factual, and open.
pretending? I am not you. I used research against you. Let's show you. "When a liar becomes hostile or defensive, he is attempting to turn the tables on you," says Glass. The liar will get hostile because he is angry that you've discovered his lies," It is not bizarre. I don't mess around.
That English is crazy joke was an attempt to bring humor and I did not write that. At the beginning it says "I think a retired English teacher was bored." and at the end "Now it's UP to you what you do with this email." A few years ago, someone emailed it to me.
If this is who you are, I feel sorry for you.
hyeonjin’s crying face gave me shivers, mujin’s pissed off face gave me butterflies, but jiheon’s normal face is just.. my type (づ￣ ³￣)づ
yes jiheon who the fuck do u think u r u gaslighting son of a bij (i still luv u tho). and my bby wooju, its not ur fault everybody likes u ok (cos i luv u too). but goddammm.. mr professor. why the fuck are you so mother effin hot but red flaggy like seriously, if sus why hot?? ╥﹏╥
literally all my thoughts in one comment
great minds think alike
these many chapters without anything bad happening screams upcoming drama
translation so atrocious its like learning a new language. anyway.. fl is supposedly an adult but i guess she’s just dumb af..? really cute art tho
wtf i feel so bad for her. everyone stirring up shit without telling her shit. i wanna slap them all (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I read up to the beginning of chapter 9 and got annoyed. Like I get that he wanted to be an anonymous sponsor but why do you think a kid would act up jumping off the roof and running away if he was happy at home? But the girl he paid to monitor him was kinda annoying too like, he paid you so much money to let him know if the boy was okay and cLEARLY HE WAS NOT and you just don’t tell him because he didn’t ask???
(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Just keep reading it will become better but cha to handle haesoo is still same ... he don't give him straight answer boy just become confuse af...
Thanks for the reply but damnnn that doesn’t good…
^ doesn’t sound good**
Yah I mean if you are into younger seme with yandere vibes has so much control over a older uke then it's for you , otherwise story is good for me cuz I m into dark and twisted stories.