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Too Fast

EmpressNight December 9, 2020 8:53 pm

The major problem with this whole story is the pacing. Everything happens way to fast with little to no explanation of the actual plot. I'm sure the novel itself is probably at least well thought out, but this is just so quick that it becomes boring. I don't know who any of these characters are, and by the time I'm interested in an arcs storyline, it's changing to the next one in 2 chapters.

It's likely an okay read for some people but personally it isn't for me.

Responses
    Imprezz July 21, 2021 1:14 am

    Haha he just has all these random girls surrounding him, does he every have any male friends lol. There are literally too many girls to count and keep up with ╥﹏╥