-MC sprained his leg in Ch: 3 only to run with the girl on his arms in the next chapter -Grandpa of the girl holds her as a baby in one panel in Ch: 4. Usually this is normal the only problem is that the grandpa looks like in his mid-twenties or thirties and the girl is supposed to die before she gets 22. You cant tell me a man can age like that in only 18 years or less. -In Ch: 5 the MC is beaten up by these two dudes until he lays bloody on the ground and cant even move, in the next chapter he looks as good as ever except the few scratches on his face and even runs to his house. And yes maybe the rain washed the blood off him, but cmon, if he was bleeding where are the open wounds?
Goodnight, Im out and yes, you may call me a nitpicker.
-MC sprained his leg in Ch: 3 only to run with the girl on his arms in the next chapter
-Grandpa of the girl holds her as a baby in one panel in Ch: 4. Usually this is normal the only problem is that the grandpa looks like in his mid-twenties or thirties and the girl is supposed to die before she gets 22. You cant tell me a man can age like that in only 18 years or less.
-In Ch: 5 the MC is beaten up by these two dudes until he lays bloody on the ground and cant even move, in the next chapter he looks as good as ever except the few scratches on his face and even runs to his house. And yes maybe the rain washed the blood off him, but cmon, if he was bleeding where are the open wounds?
Goodnight, Im out and yes, you may call me a nitpicker.