I've read this before, and liked it a lot. I reread it after a few years pass, and I still like it, but I've noticed what I hadn't before. In the last part, when Hachizume had a fight with Misonoi (I'm not sure about the spellings of their names) it seems Misonoi never really got to say the other details of what he wanted to say, and Hachizume never really asked for any explanation afterwards of what Misonoi was actually thinking. It's like, "let bygones be bygones, let's put that behind us as a horrible memory" like an incomplete resolution. I don't know, maybe Hachizume was clever enought to realize what Misonoi was actually thinking; of wanting him to prioritize himself first, not that he doesn't want to be with him anymore. Or, there was a resolution, but it's not that apparent, such that Misonoi realized that he can't be without Hachizume... but I think that still doesn't really put out he core thought of "I want him here, but I wish he prioritized himself then"?
Also, side note, I kind of wanted to see the possible romance between mr.bubblegum and mr.glasses.
I've read this before, and liked it a lot. I reread it after a few years pass, and I still like it, but I've noticed what I hadn't before.
In the last part, when Hachizume had a fight with Misonoi (I'm not sure about the spellings of their names) it seems Misonoi never really got to say the other details of what he wanted to say, and Hachizume never really asked for any explanation afterwards of what Misonoi was actually thinking. It's like, "let bygones be bygones, let's put that behind us as a horrible memory" like an incomplete resolution. I don't know, maybe Hachizume was clever enought to realize what Misonoi was actually thinking; of wanting him to prioritize himself first, not that he doesn't want to be with him anymore. Or, there was a resolution, but it's not that apparent, such that Misonoi realized that he can't be without Hachizume... but I think that still doesn't really put out he core thought of "I want him here, but I wish he prioritized himself then"?
Also, side note, I kind of wanted to see the possible romance between mr.bubblegum and mr.glasses.