I......am......so confused. The story just backtracked once it realized it forgot the beginning, and it was done clumsily. The main and first part was GREAT and the flash story was great, but they didn't tie them together well. That middle of the background story could be stronger.
I......am......so confused.
The story just backtracked once it realized it forgot the beginning, and it was done clumsily.
The main and first part was GREAT and the flash story was great, but they didn't tie them together well. That middle of the background story could be stronger.