Come back when youre the mc who actually proves that they'll do what they ought to do, because so far you haven't had any developments from facing some fights and haven't been thinking about your current situation, the hints you have to find your brother and your dad and all youre doing is yapping about "im going to find my dad and my brother!" While doing nothing but get in danger, youre all bark no bite. i hope you grow some balls in the future chapters bc i really think the plot is nice
Olga. Look. I don't hate you but.
Come back when youre the mc who actually proves that they'll do what they ought to do, because so far you haven't had any developments from facing some fights and haven't been thinking about your current situation, the hints you have to find your brother and your dad and all youre doing is yapping about "im going to find my dad and my brother!" While doing nothing but get in danger, youre all bark no bite. i hope you grow some balls in the future chapters bc i really think the plot is nice