Started off OK, second ML was annoying but still alright. Then from Chap 8 or so the pacing started getting bad and the cliches mounted.
I mean, their fight was so unrealistic. It really just came out of nowhere since there was no conflict prior to that and suddenly they're falling apart. And then suddenly there's this guy who wants to molest him...? They're HS kids, considering the context and the culture, the perpetrator has a LOT to lose since he'll be branded as the homosexual. Then the ML comes out of nowhere, saves him and then they kiss. I'm more surprised that during the drinking game ML didn't do the cliche and drink for him.
Started off OK, second ML was annoying but still alright. Then from Chap 8 or so the pacing started getting bad and the cliches mounted.
I mean, their fight was so unrealistic. It really just came out of nowhere since there was no conflict prior to that and suddenly they're falling apart. And then suddenly there's this guy who wants to molest him...? They're HS kids, considering the context and the culture, the perpetrator has a LOT to lose since he'll be branded as the homosexual. Then the ML comes out of nowhere, saves him and then they kiss. I'm more surprised that during the drinking game ML didn't do the cliche and drink for him.
Art though is pretty.