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Nice... but first story's elder brother was such a drama queen in a body that was way too ...

Jas October 24, 2014 3:15 am

Nice... but first story's elder brother was such a drama queen in a body that was way too manly for that, and he was a deeply resentful (rather than shy) Tsundere, I couldn't manage to sympathize even though I really wanted to... Though Ibuki was also a piece of work, I couldn't get what it was that appealed to him so much about that twisted older bro... It would have worked better if we had gotten an extra from Ibuki's point of view and found out why (same as we got an extra from the rich lover's point of view for the second story), then perhaps I would have found something likeable about that holier-than-thou character.

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    Hmmm...K October 24, 2014 4:47 am

    I totally agree. This is one of those stories where I just couldn't force myself to give a fuck about or root for any of these characters. They could have all been ran over by the end of the story and it would have been okay with me. Instead of a taboo incest story, it came across as just...well, gross.

    xin March 11, 2018 12:55 am
    I totally agree. This is one of those stories where I just couldn't force myself to give a fuck about or root for any of these characters. They could have all been ran over by the end of the story and it would ... @Hmmm...K

    totally agree