I feel like this is going all over the place. It started out pretty good and then it kinda tried to be too many things at once. It feel very forced. The thing I'm most upset about is the FL reactions to the ML. He's a scumbag, he attacked her precious little brother (the one she was determed to dedicate her life to), he is trying to force her into a marriage and she just keeps defending and justifying him (even if only to herself). Just No.
I feel like this is going all over the place. It started out pretty good and then it kinda tried to be too many things at once. It feel very forced. The thing I'm most upset about is the FL reactions to the ML. He's a scumbag, he attacked her precious little brother (the one she was determed to dedicate her life to), he is trying to force her into a marriage and she just keeps defending and justifying him (even if only to herself). Just No.