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Story telling is starting to frail

Consenting Seme July 3, 2024 2:35 am

I love Regina but her plan is so goddamn stupid! What do you mean you're going to fight a witch who has nothing to lose, is blood thirsty, prolly has a hidden army of her manipulated minions somewhere in the Sulveige duchy, all by yourself? And who do you bring with you? Not the wizards of the castel but Aaron of all people!

Like what are you going to do against a witch, you're a mere Knight! Sure she's not gonna die because she's the MC but I'm not the type of reader who rely on such narrative to justify bad story telling decisions. It doesn't make her seem like the strong, determined, strategical Gina we knew from the beginning rather a hurried fool who jumps at the first occasion presented even if it's not the best decision as this plan requires much coordination and arm force. I don't care if Gina doesn't mind dying, her death would be utterly useless as she's bound to fail. Anita clearly has her shit figures out that's how she's been able to whoop their ass so easily until now and they should do the same.

Anyway rant over!

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