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I still don't get the presence of the pretty dude. Sure he's the ML whose beauty captivate...

PannyP. July 1, 2024 4:36 pm

I still don't get the presence of the pretty dude. Sure he's the ML whose beauty captivates anyone but currently ,that's about it. I'm just here for our badass MC and her dynamic with her brother.

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    LeRain July 1, 2024 6:58 pm

    Yeah I don’t hate him, but I wish he had a stronger personality, instead of just being an emotionally dumb guy with a pretty face

    Indigo Hue July 2, 2024 9:37 am

    OMG I had just posted something like this! Dude has the personality of wonder bread!! I’m really out here with a magnifying glass to find SOMETHING worth talking about besides his looks! Dude just zones out 24/7 in most of his interactions and stands there with a blank look in his eyes as everyone else gushes about his pretty face.

    It was cute the first 20-ish chapters, but now that the plot is moving along and things are starting to get more serious… the joke is old. It’s giving 1dimensional character. Even when he figured out that he liked the MC, I didn’t feel anything. Why? Cause we had a freaking time skip and the audience is told that the guy we haven’t seen in forever and lacks presence in the story suddenly thinks the MC has pretty eyes. …WOWWW!! EXCITING!! !

    We have NO interaction b/w them that speaks on their chemistry. They haven’t shared a joke together, they haven’t laughed together, or had a private conversation together that wasn’t him mentally checking out immediately for whatever reason. No. Chemistry. At. ALL! Dude is boring af. I’d rather see the MC interact with her dad or brother more! ML just takes up pages at this point ngl

    LeRain July 2, 2024 2:18 pm
    OMG I had just posted something like this! Dude has the personality of wonder bread!! I’m really out here with a magnifying glass to find SOMETHING worth talking about besides his looks! Dude just zones out 2... Indigo Hue

    Lmao I was looking for that word. He just mentally checks out, bro has one brain cell and usually just stands there with a blank face that everybody raves about.

    Indigo Hue July 2, 2024 5:35 pm
    Lmao I was looking for that word. He just mentally checks out, bro has one brain cell and usually just stands there with a blank face that everybody raves about. LeRain

    His pretty privilege is working overtime