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Didn't really work out for me

Frosche79 June 30, 2024 4:48 pm

I genuinely didn't like the story. The only thing I I think is okay here is the art. Especially with the characters. I personally love the other guy, the second male lead here, with the art and character and all.

The storyline is bad, the pacing itself is okay, but the main characters I personally don't like.

Like, what the hell are they doing sleeping around, rolling together on the cold hard ground when they should be focused more on running away and surviving?
Also, what is up with the FL? Why does she not wear any bra? That's the most concerning part for me. I get that it's josei but, come on. You made it more in line with drama, then at least make the character more comfortable while she tries to survive in a jungle.

I can't imagine wearing nothing on top and having these tribemen ogling me and touching my chest like it'd nothing, and then jumping from tree to tree with my boobs just flailing around. She didn't even FEEL uncomfortable too and that's the worst part.

Also, the reason why I lasted this long reading into the story is because I was curious about the thing they called their god here. And the more I read, the less I understand. The entity's not a god, it's easier to say that it's a demon instead. And I didn't like that the story reached over 90 chapters with more and more problems but with less and less solutions. Really, really, really hated that.

So I'm gonna go. I'll probably look back on this but won't finish it because of this feedback coz honestly, I tried. I really tried and it didn't work out for me.
Not saying that the story itself is trash because I appreciate the effort of the author and artist. Just that this doesn't appeal to me as with other people.

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