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Good but a lot of plot holes

Grimmy June 29, 2024 4:41 pm

I thought the story was pretty good until the reveal who actually started the scandal. I really didn't understand that plot line because it was clear to everyone the prince loved him, and even Nile pointed that out. The issues with Betas in the world is wild. Most a/b/o story universes don't want an Omega, or just want them to have the Alpha's kids and nothing more. But betas now are on the bottom of teir it seems. I was really curious if male Betas could have kids in this one, but I guess not. Still, lots of unresolved stuff. Did I miss what happened to ukes dad? Or his mom?

His mom sucked btw. She really just did not care for her kid. Having him was a parting gift??? You knew his father was crazy. I get her life doesn't seem great WITH A TRACKER IN HER ARM but like terrible mom and person all around. And did the Prince have to give up his right to the throne? Thats what it seem like. I find it odd he can just live a normal life in a normal apartment without any security or something, but it's pretty obvious he still works for the palace. A lot just doesnt make sense in the end, but it wasnt a terrible read

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