Sorry, guys! During system maintenance, some functions like comment are unavailable.

bad, just bad

Saya June 26, 2024 9:57 am

a pushover mc and a manipulative love interest, but with no interesting aspects. the love interest is the creepy type of stalker, uses cheap manipulative tactics and the way is following the mc around isn't even cute, while the mc has no reason for acting the way he is. it's so superficial and lacks so many details that I had to drop it in less than 10 chapters

Responses
    Fruit is tasty. June 26, 2024 10:11 am

    Damn. And all it took for me to stay was the good art and smex. Haven’t read this in a minute and your comment reminded me that this story did have potential but lacked on a lot of aspects regardless

    Saya June 27, 2024 1:09 pm
    Damn. And all it took for me to stay was the good art and smex. Haven’t read this in a minute and your comment reminded me that this story did have potential but lacked on a lot of aspects regardless Fruit is tasty.

    exactly, because it's a classic power struggle, like a poor uke and a rich seme who pays off his debt, but this story has no substance. it felt like the author was going down a list of what we love in a story, but then forgot to give personalities to the characters ( ̄へ ̄)