I have to calmly disagree with this one, I'm not sure if you're expecting the usually two-thousand-chapter story that no one actually ever finishes because this moves decently,
I'm not gonna say the pace is amazing, but it's definitely not too fast. Scenarios and plots are put out there without dueling too much on certain parts. Or did you want all these chapters to be like a building arc where the mc is still fixing that house or where he's still sitting in that castle? Because everything is seen through to the end before moving on with no part unmentioned, or are you used to stories that only focus on one plot? Your issue with the scenario also confuses me, because it isn't, they add background from the last without losing the plot for the next. Really, I'm trying to understand where you're coming from but cant.
Okay, I do see that, I also feel like it is missing key parts for the abrupt emotional changes it makes sense if you overthink about the 'whys' but you shouldn't have to overthink to understand the development of characters, speaking of, anyone that isn't in the mc immediate friend group seems to assume the worse even if they see him change. So when they see something mildly incriminating about him, Mc becomes the scapegoat because 'oh yeah he's supposed to be bad and therefore unable to have actual change'. It doesn't make that much sense for characters that are initially supposedly decent-understanding people, like the original protagonist.
ngl this moves way to fast and the way the actual story is set up is dumb and it’s a repeat of each scenario each other chapter