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Aight so

Ilya Volkov June 23, 2024 7:35 am

- Have no problem with the ML falling for FL so soon, it feels like a breathe of fresh air or change of pace. Though the reason do be kinda shallow. So you'll fall for anyone that will approach you without fear, is that what you're implying?

- But FL do be kinda dense, and half-assing around

- NAWH ACTUALLY most of the characters here seem to love half-assing around, indecisive, and full of reluctance. The only few charas without these traits are ML's mom and bootleg Sylphynford Tachibana.

- Author doesn't seem to understand how to write a FL, they tried to portray FL as someone that knows what she needs to do, but it fails miserably in a way. All it did was made her appear 1-dimensional. If there's anything that made FL reluctant, author would pull the 'trauma-card' without going more in depth to explore and give us a hindsight of the FL's actual thoughts. The OG FL seem to have a more interesting personality than the current FL tbh, especially in the complex way she was written.

- The plot is all over the place, the shitty translation doesn't make it better (Praying for our Lord and Savior AkumaKira to take notice of this manhwa, but at the same time not really, coz this manhwa seems like a trainwreck).

- Lovely Art, lovely outfits, though at times the movements of characters seem a bit stiff, but hey we all started from somewhere.

- Hir is cute but why yo gotta make him appear like he's on the verge of tears 24/7 ToT like gorl are u a sadist, give this kid genuine happiness ghads

- Currently no chara development, plot is confusing. Still hope it can be improved tbh. I'll be staying to see more of bootleg Sylphynford, she's my fav chara now.

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