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Stop reading and find a better mermaid bl story

angeltyun__ June 23, 2024 4:45 am

I hate everything about this. There is no complexity in the story. The characters were given a conflict and the story just went on with that single thing so the storytelling was linear. Giving the character another problem just adds another dot to that linear storytelling, it wasn't giving us the branch it wants to give. There was no good foreshadowing so it felt like the scenes were just put together and called it a day. The main characters suck. ML is an ultimate asshole, MC is insufferable. The dialogues seems like it was trying to be poetic but it's just not giving. Characters could have handled things better and the writer could have given them an obstacle. If Eunwoo was created to have a mindset that accepts his fate and is ready to die loving, it would have given us a much better story flow with the opposite mindset that eunwoo and taeho have since taeho aims to protect eunwoo. Whatever. This is just a let down. People said it gets better at the middle but I already reached chapter 50+ and the story really aint going anywhere so I skipped to the last 3 chapters and viola! There weren't anything exciting to those parts either that made me change my mind and continue it from where I left instead. It's like they compressed everything at the last 20 chapters after prolonging shits for the first 50.

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