I loved the story and the main couple’s relationship. It was all good, except for some things I wish it think could have been included to further flesh out the story:
The part where MC learned all his teaching from his master from that hole. And was also mentioned to be hiding his true abilities by that one lady. It felt like we didn’t see much or maybe even seen his full power cause majority of the story he was holding back. I guess it may be because he didn’t actually fight any real opponent so he did have any reason to show his full powers.
Also the author could’ve put some flashback sequences of what the ML and the MC’s father did during the 10 years MC was gone. It would’ve put more angst and attachment in the story to actually see them suffering lol. It also would’ve been more interesting to see more about the magyo cult and what the ML learned there.
Finally, the conclusion of revenge was a little anti-climatic. I thought we were gonna get a scene where they’re pretending at war and they would physically fight the ML’s father at the end. I didn’t expect his ending would just be at a trial. Also with how easily the father was killed off kinda felt funny that they spent 10 whole years of planning for him to just be stabbed with a sword lol. I DO completely understand why the ML did that as opposed to keeping him alive and wanting to torture him previously. He wanted to finally end his revenge so he can happily move on with the MC instead of drag it out. I just kinda wished there was more talk between him and the ML. Like it would’ve been more angsty had ML told him he was wrong or something about his mother only using him- then the father would realize he was wrong all this time, only to realize right before he’s killed off. Rather than him being all angry and then being like “I still can’t catch up to you!” To him imagining his wife.
I loved the story and the main couple’s relationship. It was all good, except for some things I wish it think could have been included to further flesh out the story:
The part where MC learned all his teaching from his master from that hole. And was also mentioned to be hiding his true abilities by that one lady. It felt like we didn’t see much or maybe even seen his full power cause majority of the story he was holding back. I guess it may be because he didn’t actually fight any real opponent so he did have any reason to show his full powers.
Also the author could’ve put some flashback sequences of what the ML and the MC’s father did during the 10 years MC was gone. It would’ve put more angst and attachment in the story to actually see them suffering lol. It also would’ve been more interesting to see more about the magyo cult and what the ML learned there.
Finally, the conclusion of revenge was a little anti-climatic. I thought we were gonna get a scene where they’re pretending at war and they would physically fight the ML’s father at the end. I didn’t expect his ending would just be at a trial. Also with how easily the father was killed off kinda felt funny that they spent 10 whole years of planning for him to just be stabbed with a sword lol. I DO completely understand why the ML did that as opposed to keeping him alive and wanting to torture him previously. He wanted to finally end his revenge so he can happily move on with the MC instead of drag it out. I just kinda wished there was more talk between him and the ML. Like it would’ve been more angsty had ML told him he was wrong or something about his mother only using him- then the father would realize he was wrong all this time, only to realize right before he’s killed off. Rather than him being all angry and then being like “I still can’t catch up to you!” To him imagining his wife.