The author tried to pull every stop for this It would have been more satisfying if the MC tried dating someone else. Like that would have been much more satisfying and fulfilling. Ah the ending was more irritating, open ending. Are you in a sci fi movie, No. u never gave a suffering arc for the ML. It was few trickets and bam, he should have suffered more. This could have so much potential. I was the author of this story, then I would have made it more so that the main lead would have suffered a little bit more like working as an investor for the other May lead and watching him falling in love or maybe like a deceiving act, where he is falling in love with another man And he would do anything to stop him, pulling stunts, begging, grovelling, being really stupid
The author tried to pull every stop for this
It would have been more satisfying if the MC tried dating someone else. Like that would have been much more satisfying and fulfilling. Ah the ending was more irritating, open ending. Are you in a sci fi movie, No. u never gave a suffering arc for the ML. It was few trickets and bam, he should have suffered more. This could have so much potential. I was the author of this story, then I would have made it more so that the main lead would have suffered a little bit more like working as an investor for the other May lead and watching him falling in love or maybe like a deceiving act, where he is falling in love with another man And he would do anything to stop him, pulling stunts, begging, grovelling, being really stupid