Responses
THIS!!! 100%! this story had so much potential but the whole sex scenes and relationships throw off the entire thing
The way I’ve actually been thinking the same thing. I’m like is it the grape scenes the author is calling hot??And they’d make the grape scenes more hot? Doesn’t sit right with me what they said
the author’s words really put a bad taste in my mouth. for there to be even hotter sex scenes there would have to be hot sex scenes in the first place. and shipping the mc with the character you wrote to be toxic and disgusting is just…something feels off here.