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LMAOOOOO

Vero_Gx June 9, 2024 5:05 am

I'm living for the comments wacking Hinata! Get him again for me!

Like ain't nothing wrong with being a trashy ass manwhore (at least in fiction stories) as long as the author gives the character a proper redemption arc and in the case of him playing with the bottom's feelings, a good chasing arc.
This has none of it which makes the story so wack and pisses off most of the readers.

The bottom and the art carried the story (he's so damn beautiful and cute damn) I can't say anything about him letting himself be pushed around and giving himself, practically begging to be taken by Hinata cause you can be stupid when you're naive, inexperienced, a virgin, an in love. Though I was hoping that grown up talk the one night stand gave him would opened his eyes and lead to a redemption or chasing arc from Hinata's side.

And hinata calling the one night stand "so sexy" while the bottom was by his side and supposedly already in love was so trashy LMAO like if emo-kun wasn't with him he would have fuck him again I bet.

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