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May 29, 2024 3:47 am

I'm not enjoying the story. It feels like eating flavorless bok choy only to sate your hunger, I'm most likely going to be dropping this for a myriad of reasons. The writing feels sloppy and I didn't enjoy the other characters except from the Lucian, the beastmen, and in the beginning, Rachel.

The ML is a victim of abuse, which Rachel is totally aware of, and despite being the favorite of his father Rachel took barely any action towards the ML's father. Her threat (She won't call the duke "dad") didn't do anything and her attempts were weak and useless. She's a transmigrator, knows how bad the abuse was, has previous knowledge from her past life, was also a victim, and despite this she couldn't stand up for Lucian?

Another thing I hate about the story is how poor the "apology" was from the duke and duchess. That's it? That's it? Duke has little to no consequences for abusing his child? Duchess had little to no consequences for neglecting her child? That's it? Despite Rachel's priority being Lucian, she couldn't stand up for Lucian like she could've and should've?

Additionally, I know it's because she's overthinking things, and because there's families after her, and everything is chaotic but I just don't appreciate how after they finally got together author decides to stir the pot by making Rachel break up with Lucian.

I would read it only to pass the time and not to actually read something I find enjoyable. It's mediocre

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