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Boring

Anonymous May 10, 2024 6:52 am

This story is very lackluster but I will still see it through to the end. My biggest problem with this is evie and violet’s relationship, like it’s very complex and that’s not the problem but violet is constantly doing stuff that he knows will hurt evie and when she’s actually hurt he’s full of regret. I understand he hates making her feel sad bc he loves her but he continues to lead her on by constantly favoring her, showing affection, and even kissing her. Then when he suddenly remembers that the completion was made so that she can’t win and that he will only end up hurting her in the end he tries distance himself. And like whatever I guess since they obviously end up together so at the end of the day it doesn’t matter, but it’s the same shit every two chapters like let’s do something new. Also there are so many interesting characters (much more so than the FL) but once we start getting to know them they disappear, for example the red head who wants to go to the mage tower, and the girl with the really good sense of fashion who became stylists apprentice.

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    Anonymous June 20, 2024 7:19 am

    I lied I never finished this shit