I really loved this so much when i started it. But now.... i haven't been enjoying this for quite a while and I fear this is the last drop.
Firstly the plot isn't even interesting. The pacing is all over the place, she's in that boring ass school, then crazy war things happen, she's in the school again. And the whole plot of her fighting against that demon guy isn't even fun in the first place but now it rarely even matters!!!!
Secondly I hate the romance. It has pedo vibes from BOTH ends. Kahil started liking enisha when she was like 5 years old. And enisha now likes kahil back when she is actually centuries old! Or whatever her age was, she was at least like in her 20s/30s. The cherry on top is that they have zero chemistry and no moments that make your heart flutter in the slightest.
Thirdly the characters. The characters are so cardboard cutter thin. I couldn't care less about any of them. The worst offenders obv being KAHIL AND ENISHA. Goddamn it, they are so bland. Esp enisha, our fucking main character. She is supposed to be smart but she hasn't shown that at all. And she lets people push her around like crazy. Speak up girl.
Fourthly the enisha fan club. If you have to mention how great this character is, is it really that great? It's being SHOVED down our throats how perfect enisha is when neither her character design nor her personality are anything special. And EVERYONE loves her. No exceptions. It's not even funny. I don't get why and I'm so tired of every single character being reduced to loving Enisha plus her now having a real fanclub.
No. 5 her family. I've already ranted a lot about how some scenes here border on incest fetishism with how weirdly fanservice panels are placed and with how obsessed her brothers are with her. I'll include the mages in her family for now bc the same goes for them, except it's at least not bordering incest... But oh wait! They canonically feel a familial bond towards her and she picked them up as kids.... and one of them is in love with her! That part isn't incestuous but it makes me sick.
No. 6 and my absolute favorite head banger. The over protectiveness. Yeah, i get loving your siblings. I get being protective. I do. I am like that. But this??? This is not normal. I'm so SICK of it. Enisha can't move without her family or the mages getting absolutely crazy protective. There's no other topic in the world for them other than putting Enisha in a cage i guess. It always was annoying and went overboard. I hated how they talked about her being in a relationship. Hell, i can't even make many examples because they do it literally every scene. But this chapter i genuinely had to pause for a minute before i could go on and I felt such rage reading this. What the fuck. They actually want to kill her lover??? I'm sorry dear author, but are you aware of how messed up this is? I thought they'd finally get the hint, finally let her LIVE. but no. Obv not. It only gets worse. And the best thing is that Enisha never ever says a word and lets it happen
I really loved this so much when i started it. But now.... i haven't been enjoying this for quite a while and I fear this is the last drop.
Firstly the plot isn't even interesting. The pacing is all over the place, she's in that boring ass school, then crazy war things happen, she's in the school again. And the whole plot of her fighting against that demon guy isn't even fun in the first place but now it rarely even matters!!!!
Secondly I hate the romance. It has pedo vibes from BOTH ends. Kahil started liking enisha when she was like 5 years old. And enisha now likes kahil back when she is actually centuries old! Or whatever her age was, she was at least like in her 20s/30s.
The cherry on top is that they have zero chemistry and no moments that make your heart flutter in the slightest.
Thirdly the characters. The characters are so cardboard cutter thin. I couldn't care less about any of them. The worst offenders obv being KAHIL AND ENISHA. Goddamn it, they are so bland.
Esp enisha, our fucking main character. She is supposed to be smart but she hasn't shown that at all. And she lets people push her around like crazy. Speak up girl.
Fourthly the enisha fan club. If you have to mention how great this character is, is it really that great? It's being SHOVED down our throats how perfect enisha is when neither her character design nor her personality are anything special.
And EVERYONE loves her. No exceptions. It's not even funny. I don't get why and I'm so tired of every single character being reduced to loving Enisha plus her now having a real fanclub.
No. 5 her family. I've already ranted a lot about how some scenes here border on incest fetishism with how weirdly fanservice panels are placed and with how obsessed her brothers are with her.
I'll include the mages in her family for now bc the same goes for them, except it's at least not bordering incest... But oh wait! They canonically feel a familial bond towards her and she picked them up as kids.... and one of them is in love with her! That part isn't incestuous but it makes me sick.
No. 6 and my absolute favorite head banger. The over protectiveness. Yeah, i get loving your siblings. I get being protective. I do. I am like that. But this??? This is not normal. I'm so SICK of it.
Enisha can't move without her family or the mages getting absolutely crazy protective. There's no other topic in the world for them other than putting Enisha in a cage i guess. It always was annoying and went overboard. I hated how they talked about her being in a relationship. Hell, i can't even make many examples because they do it literally every scene.
But this chapter i genuinely had to pause for a minute before i could go on and I felt such rage reading this.
What the fuck.
They actually want to kill her lover??? I'm sorry dear author, but are you aware of how messed up this is? I thought they'd finally get the hint, finally let her LIVE. but no. Obv not. It only gets worse.
And the best thing is that Enisha never ever says a word and lets it happen