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i like the first story more

senpai_wants_you_to_notice_him January 31, 2017 6:04 pm

Both stories are good but the second one was predictable! The first one had a twist

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    xin March 11, 2018 12:26 am

    first story was more predictable, had a terrible pacing, poor character development and clichéd plot. the ending was so much like how i expected it. it's disappointing but not surprising.

    the second one was not the best but it was more bearable at least. characters there had more reasonable actions and choices.