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rayray March 24, 2024 6:16 pm

read this in one go and all those x scenes became exhausting because there's too many of them and I think that makes the characters' development seems like an afterthought

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    __.lyxae March 24, 2024 11:17 pm

    i think so too like I feel like a saw their dicks more than their faces

    HereWeScreamSilently March 25, 2024 3:46 am

    Its a story with smut so you shouldn't be surprised. Unlike many other stories, this one at least has a progressing plot

    __.lyxae March 25, 2024 11:09 pm
    Its a story with smut so you shouldn't be surprised. Unlike many other stories, this one at least has a progressing plot HereWeScreamSilently

    yeah I know im....just saying. There's a lot of stories with smut and it doesn't feel like too much . It's just that maybe it would be more likable with this one if one or two scenes of sex were removed. Even tho they help our mc to have a development. Don't know if you'll understand what im trying to say . But you're right

    Skoopy March 26, 2024 3:16 am

    Yeah definitely felt like more smut than story. I admit I was just straight scrolling past smut scenes. So far run away assistant is definitely a better read in my book.