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Morohtar March 24, 2024 8:46 am

I'm not sure about this story btw. It seems decent at the core but somehow the comic seems rushed and stretched at the same time, weirdly enough. Not sure how it manages that.
I'm also not feeling the emotions all to much for some reason. maybe due to us not seeing them have a happy friendly life first. But without that the dragic stuff just doesn't hit hard enough for me.

I think the beginning could have done better with some more taking time to let us get to know both women and the knight too (pretty boy he is~).
Hopefully it'll not be as predictable as I think from now on. And not as rushed or 'empty' in each chapter. They really seem awfully short tbh.

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