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cud be worse tho tbf 3.5/10

A person (*) March 23, 2024 6:21 am

their whole rs is based on her jst saving him n their personalities r too flat like why wasn't he more wary of her right at the beginning why does he even fall for her??? n the pace n art is shi too

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    A person (*) March 23, 2024 6:24 am

    not to mention the slavery plot device it contradicts her whole kind saviour act cuz she doesn't care abt the slaves jst abt her own ass being saved

    Torabunbun March 27, 2024 10:49 pm
    not to mention the slavery plot device it contradicts her whole kind saviour act cuz she doesn't care abt the slaves jst abt her own ass being saved A person (*)

    And you find that WRONG? You try being in her shoes and letting the story take its original course, you would be dead, abandoned by your fiancee and killed by Kian.
    I would much rather save him from having more reason to kill the nobility than be killed myself. And if he falls for me along the way, that's fine. While I am saving my own ass, I would treat him better than anyone.

    A person (*) March 28, 2024 4:24 am
    And you find that WRONG? You try being in her shoes and letting the story take its original course, you would be dead, abandoned by your fiancee and killed by Kian.I would much rather save him from having more ... Torabunbun

    bffr idc abt how she's approaching him n trying to save her own ass it's the characters personalities that r shi esp the mc she regressed n all she does w it is buy a slave n makes HIM grateful for it. like the author didn't even try n make her likable which isn't hard esp w a copy paste villainess story like this one, she's hypocritical asf for trying to give the ml freedom but not the others. and that's not to mention the ml, bros reaction isn't even in line w his charac background why did he take face level fake kindness INSTEAD of being wary for longer, they have no proper interactions or chemistry n a kid cudve written a better plot

    A person (*) March 28, 2024 4:27 am
    bffr idc abt how she's approaching him n trying to save her own ass it's the characters personalities that r shi esp the mc she regressed n all she does w it is buy a slave n makes HIM grateful for it. like the... A person (*)

    my main issue is w how the characters have been written that's all

    Torabunbun March 28, 2024 9:13 pm
    bffr idc abt how she's approaching him n trying to save her own ass it's the characters personalities that r shi esp the mc she regressed n all she does w it is buy a slave n makes HIM grateful for it. like the... A person (*)

    She couldn't have helped the other slaves because it would complicate things for her and just taking Kian from the night life was already a risk enough. She has no power to stop the system if it's Royal family who allows this type of thing so just taking Kian, a man who will kill the nobility and herself was enough to stop such a tragedy. This is about survival, of course it would seem like the FL is selfish and hypocritical but she just wants to survive. I don't believe she's taking her kindness either as she does get worried about him.

    A person (*) April 4, 2024 12:34 am
    She couldn't have helped the other slaves because it would complicate things for her and just taking Kian from the night life was already a risk enough. She has no power to stop the system if it's Royal family ... Torabunbun

    if ur gonna keep d riding the author atleast support them n read it somewhere else hoe

    Torabunbun April 4, 2024 1:24 pm
    if ur gonna keep d riding the author atleast support them n read it somewhere else hoe A person (*)

    Fuck you bastard, learn your fucking English and talk to me again when you make fucking sense cunt

    A person (*) April 5, 2024 2:05 am
    Fuck you bastard, learn your fucking English and talk to me again when you make fucking sense cunt Torabunbun

    bitch just cuz u can't get fucking simple concepts doesn't mean no one else can I stated my opinion about it n the issues n u commented like a bird shit out of nowhere not even getting my fucking point so why don't u take ur own damn advice then we wudnt have this problem u dumbfuck