Lol, I was one of those who hated the incest story (even though i'm totally into incest stories), but now I really like it a lot!
the first time i read it, I just couldn't understand what the characters were thinking (like "i hate this house, but don't steal my inheritance"), but now i understand them better, and they're just super cute!! XD
i disliked the first story not bc of the incest (welp, incest is also my game), but bc i wish the story was fleshed out a little more. i thought it was the eldest x youngest, but it turns out that the youngest was just a fake out and he never really mattered much aside from the beginning. i just wish that it had more chapters.
and yeah, jeremy is a precious cinnamon roll (づ￣ ³￣)づ
I got the feeling there was some story about the younger brother that came first, but i don't remember if I just assumed that, or if there really is a story out there somewhere that I read...
the change of heir/kidnapping could've been a trigger for kazuma to change for the better but it was just followed by some sex scene where he says he's warming up to a person that he hated before? it's like he's a changed in one snap and i hated it cause his feelings just changed for ibuki. i bet he's still a brat after that. i liked it at first because the characters had interesting diversity but the ending seemed really cliche and rushed. it would've been better for me if the first story didn't change the characters too much, too sudden just for the sake of getting the pair hook up. ibuki and kazuma's relationship, kazuma's attitude and the story overall had potential but it was wasted. really disappointing.
Love both stories!!! Idk why everyone seems to dislike the first story but i honestly liked it, incest is a soft spot for me, maybe^^" lol fuck it incest is my game man i fuck with it so bad. Well written and well thought out, honestly one of the best plot.
But still the latter was so adorbs jeremey is so pure ㅠ must protect at all times