There was so much potential I felt like the story itself had a good plot excluding the grape that could’ve been avoided, I liked the concept of adopted to be raised as hunters and sent out to war instead, and I liked the dungeon where they ended up stuck for years but the grape was unnecessary there was so much self exploration that could’ve been done cause he technically fell in love w the one person he should kinda dislike kinda a love mixed w envy him leaving behind a letter w his feelings would’ve conveyed the same thing the author wanted to I guess w out the grape and then the constant torture of years with no end of entering a dungeon and miraculously surviving until he’s finally strong enough to come out standing that part was great I feel that maybe some longing for the brat he hated to love would’ve fit nice, kinda being w guys that reminded him of him, and I would’ve loved him to be stronger when it came to the time dungeon kinda a stronger man who knows no one else would be able to handle what they have so far and he wouldn’t wish it on his worst enemy maybe a flash of his younger brother seeing him in uniform enter the dungeon would’ve been nice, I didn’t like the younger brother being stronger than the older, I feel like it made everything the older brother worked on kinda go to waste, but maybe him being a bit weaker than him would’ve been great like a rescue mission after koreas last hope didn’t come out for like 2 years maybe 10 was so much time, and then more of possessiveness from the younger, kinda like he’s in a coma wakes up in a hospital and prolong them seeing face to face, let the older brother kinda come apart with his feelings and have them meet in like the dead of night after the older wakes up from a nightmare where the older thinks it’s a dream cause he doesn’t expect the younger there, him not recognizing him was so silly to me for the gravity of the moment, from what I hear there was no more explaining of the world and no system either which I did find curious nd I def feeel more explaining would be great on that cause how was the world supposed to survive if it was sounding like the world would completely collapse and I suppose they’re trying to say the younger brother is now strong enough and dealt w all but that’s kinda lame but that’s personal cause I feel that would just make our guy less valuable so I’d wanna focus on him and his power maybe he gained something from that time dungeon that could help w the others. I can def enjoy a power fight between younger and older about older wanting to go back in and the younger not wanting to let him, I think younger could be more powerful in a politics way instead that would be great and leave the physical to the older and that way we can keep the power dynamics intact to it’s beauty when it comes to a stronger bottom weaker top, anyways that’s my take (⌒▽⌒)
There was so much potential I felt like the story itself had a good plot excluding the grape that could’ve been avoided, I liked the concept of adopted to be raised as hunters and sent out to war instead, and I liked the dungeon where they ended up stuck for years but the grape was unnecessary there was so much self exploration that could’ve been done cause he technically fell in love w the one person he should kinda dislike kinda a love mixed w envy him leaving behind a letter w his feelings would’ve conveyed the same thing the author wanted to I guess w out the grape and then the constant torture of years with no end of entering a dungeon and miraculously surviving until he’s finally strong enough to come out standing that part was great I feel that maybe some longing for the brat he hated to love would’ve fit nice, kinda being w guys that reminded him of him, and I would’ve loved him to be stronger when it came to the time dungeon kinda a stronger man who knows no one else would be able to handle what they have so far and he wouldn’t wish it on his worst enemy maybe a flash of his younger brother seeing him in uniform enter the dungeon would’ve been nice, I didn’t like the younger brother being stronger than the older, I feel like it made everything the older brother worked on kinda go to waste, but maybe him being a bit weaker than him would’ve been great like a rescue mission after koreas last hope didn’t come out for like 2 years maybe 10 was so much time, and then more of possessiveness from the younger, kinda like he’s in a coma wakes up in a hospital and prolong them seeing face to face, let the older brother kinda come apart with his feelings and have them meet in like the dead of night after the older wakes up from a nightmare where the older thinks it’s a dream cause he doesn’t expect the younger there, him not recognizing him was so silly to me for the gravity of the moment, from what I hear there was no more explaining of the world and no system either which I did find curious nd I def feeel more explaining would be great on that cause how was the world supposed to survive if it was sounding like the world would completely collapse and I suppose they’re trying to say the younger brother is now strong enough and dealt w all but that’s kinda lame but that’s personal cause I feel that would just make our guy less valuable so I’d wanna focus on him and his power maybe he gained something from that time dungeon that could help w the others. I can def enjoy a power fight between younger and older about older wanting to go back in and the younger not wanting to let him, I think younger could be more powerful in a politics way instead that would be great and leave the physical to the older and that way we can keep the power dynamics intact to it’s beauty when it comes to a stronger bottom weaker top, anyways that’s my take (⌒▽⌒)