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Whoa whoa, don’t hate on the author. I think it’s great. You also haven’t even gotten halfway through the story, so there are many things that need to be tied up. Since I’ve read the raw chapters, I know what’s in store a few chapters ahead. It’s really good. The redemption arc begins in a few episodes and the ml truly does some soul searching. He’s not perfect, he still makes terrible decisions that Garam will probably hate him for later, but, looking at popularity alone, this author has done a great job. It’s not exactly unique, the the characters are funny and relatable.
I would've never thought of having a blatant homophobe as the ML in a BL but I the author did. This in the beginning was quite funny, other than the ML's weird remarks that I would believe would result in character development but no. In the beginning, the ML uses coercion to convince the MC to sleep with him and they have a relationship that results in having a FWB relationship. The MC has barely any backbone and allows the ML to walk all over him and disregard his refusal of sex. Many times this happens especially during the somophilia incident. If someone does not consent beforehand or sometimes after depending on the relationship that is sexual assault at the least and rape at its worst. To be honest this has some potential and I believed it would get better but the author doesn't intend on giving a little development to the MLs character other than “My heart hurts why can't my dick get hard” which is not development. Using the “My dick doesn't get hard without you which means we need to be together excused” is extremely lazy and lacks any kind of forethought, if anything it shows the creator's skills in writing which aren't very good.