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not a five star read only because the whole outaro plot line could've been handled way bet...

jeep January 14, 2024 8:17 am

not a five star read only because the whole outaro plot line could've been handled way better. The author could have done so many things to avoid the implied pedophilia, like they could have made outaro find out about her transforming and begrudgingly become a guiding figure in her life, which could’ve added a comedic twist. Instead the author chose to have him say “i’ll love you even if you’re 10 years old” which made me shudder. Also the way ran was drawn when she was an adult was very off putting. I understand that the adults in her life didn’t want her transforming, but since she was going to do it anyway they should have protected her so that she can at least avoid perverts (by buying her clothes that fit and a bra(!!) ffs).

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