Isn't the plot quite light? It's not have a weight on any action and fl doesn't know to do her job not gonna talk about ml cause he is.. don't have words. To sum up this story gonna fuck up later on for sure.
Yeah ikr, theres not much depth to the characters so far. Like show not tell, and there doesnt seem to be any real connection between charas. Probs cuz the ch are so short
Isn't the plot quite light? It's not have a weight on any action and fl doesn't know to do her job not gonna talk about ml cause he is.. don't have words. To sum up this story gonna fuck up later on for sure.