honestly if you ask me, the story could’ve worked just fine without the ‘romance’ and ‘love’ aspects. the earlier chapters are crap cause it’s too focused on their sexual relationship. the later chapters are interesting and deeper in plot
Not sure how far you've gotten into it, but it really does get very good eventually. You should read it on INKR. There are almost 60 chapters out and it's free to read. It's also missing chapters on here.
I get why it might seem cringey at first, especially with some of the chapters missing, so there’s a lot of context that you're not seeing. But, the plot and characters get more complex and interesting as the chapters progress.
Nah, the love aspect is essential to the story's plot.
Feels like a 11 ur old who has no idea about how real love feels like wrote this. But I'm kinda interested